試析水箬散人《駐春園小史》評點的敘事自覺

On the Narrative Consciousness of the Shui Ruo San Ren’s Comments on the Zhu Chun Yuan Xiao Shi

水箬散人於既有傳奇或小說的認知上，強調《駐春園小史》藝術成就之同時，亦凸顯其人對於才子佳人寫作應有規範或標準之認識，本文即擬以其《駐春園小史》之評點為中心，對照小說本文，探討水箬散人評價才子佳人小說書寫之意識，分析水箬散人於無慚大雅的風教前提下，所強調的欲離忽合、委曲變幻乃至胸中蘊結，筆下洋洋的典雅修辭訴求，以期理解其人對於書寫才子佳人小說之敘事自覺，尤其其中所呈顯的若干後設特質，或可做為才子佳人小說所謂尋常俗套之外的另種補充視野。

On the recognition of both legend and novels, Shui Re San Ren emphasizes the article achievement of Zhu Chun Yuan Xiao Shi and highlights how the gifted scholars and beautiful ladies’ norm or standard in novels. This essay intends to analyze Shui’s comments on Zhu Chun Yuan Xiao Shi based on moral education to evaluate the writing of the gifted scholars and beautiful ladies’, including the art of rhetoric, the change of the plot, and the lyrical content, in order to understand Shui’s narrative awareness of the gifted scholars and beautiful ladies’ novels, especially there are some meta-narratives characteristics. This research results may be regarded as a different perspective than writing conventions.